Saturday, November 10, 2012

Final Story Revision

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4qBqixLzW24&feature=plcp

Ethos: Father Figure towards the boy by telling him a life lesson
Pathos: I wanted the boy to think about life and reflect on his own life and to make him think about what decisions he has made that has involved taking the "small things" over the "bigger things"

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Story Revision

Ethos: Father Figure towards the boy by telling him a life lesson
Pathos: I wanted the boy to think about life and reflect on his own life and to make him think about what decisions he has made that has involved taking the "small things" over the "bigger things"

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

1st story video


Ethos: I wanted to come off as trying to be personally with the person I am teaching the lesson too by telling them a story that was told to me growing up.
Pathos: Audience reflect back on their own lives and have them think about if their family comes first. Because we really do need family in our lives

Article #9: "America's Sport"

http://www.foxnews.com/sports/2012/09/08/football-continues-to-dominate-high-school-sports-despite-concussion-risk/

 In this article the discussion is about concusssions as part of the game. You can not element concussions its envitable. As a former NFL lineman Brad Culpepper said in the article, "If you weren't seeing stars after a hit, it wasn't a good hit." That statement seems very brutal but its the honesty of the game. Another topic the article touched on is that dispite the health issues football still continues to dominate the professional sports in America. It is very much still "america's sport" as a matter of fact the popularity of spectors for football has increased as more people are more aware about concussions. They want to know what the future of the game will be.

Article #8: Just let the kids play

http://espn.go.com/espn/otl/story/_/id/8297366/espn-survey-finds-news-coverage-concussions-leads-majority-parents-less-likely-allow-sons-play-youth-football-leagues


This article goes into the mindset of parents when it is related to football. Many parents are very cautious of there children health and some parents believe football puts there health in danger."Football is a sport a in which severe injuries can happen when a child is not properly coached. Most youth football coaches are concerned only with winning." This statement is very true my self have come across coaches in my years of football who are only concern with winning. Therefore missing out on the importance of good technique. The unfortunate part about concussions is that even though good technique can prevent injuries, concussions are just apart of the game. So I guess parents do have valid concerns about there children playing football. Even the most die hard football fans will not let there children play because of fear of concussions. In my opinion I'm just like let the kids play and enjoy themselves. When they get that first concussion is when you can think about restricting them from playing football.

Monday, October 15, 2012

Article #7:Football over...

http://blogs.e-rockford.com/applesauce/2012/06/07/the-end-of-football-as-we-know-it/


This article just a few sentences long is trying to get at the point of is football as we know it longer. In my opinion yes football as we know it is done with. Concussions are becoming very much apart of the game. I believe that there will come a point in which players need to be punished for violent hits to the head. I already see a little now in the NFL where referees are throwing more flags and giving more penalties to a person who hits a defenseless person head on. The NFL is really trying to better there rules on head to head hits to ensure that player safety. Unfortunately if concussions continue to be a big problem numbers in youth football could dwindle as parents become more concern for there child's health.